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A Poem by RaspberryBullets

I do not want to spend every minute of every day with you - I need my own space.

 

Every conversation I hold does not have to mention your name, you already claim all my thoughts.

 

You are the light in my eyes, the joy in my smile and the music in my laugh - though I won't shout it to the world.

 

Your love for me shines true in your actions, your feelings plain in your expressions - though you do not write it on the walls for all to see.

 

There is no pretending, no lies.

 

It's you. It's me. It's us.

 

Together.

 

The perfect team.

 

 

© 2012 RaspberryBullets


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this is beautiful :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Just a good, honest piece. Maybe take out the last two lines because they are kind of redundant. I see poems like these often. Read a lot, and copy the style of those you admire. Soon enough, your own style will develop.This is still good because you're still writing. That's all that matters.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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G!o
Wow this is really some sweet piece...

Posted 7 Years Ago


RaspberryBullets

7 Years Ago

I had my doubts about this one. Do you think it is overly 'lovey dovey' ?
G!o

7 Years Ago

No totally if i was the dude ...i'd love this...i mean it don't display all that Shakespeare type of.. read more
RaspberryBullets

7 Years Ago

Thanks! :)

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