Untitled

Too much of a generalized poem to be able to choose a specific title. I'll change it once I think of it.

Ignorant people

Walking the streets

Passing each other by

No nods, no salutations

Only judgmental verifications

Reviews

[sweetie]

i love this poem because it holds a lot of truth in very few lines.
only thing i would do is: switch the last two lines, aka so the poem should read like this, to give it a good punch:
Ignorant people
Walking the streets
Passing each other by
Only judgmental verifications
No nods, no salutations

[Kayli]

Thank you! I completely agree with your advice, I think I will edit a new version.

[Sami Khalil]

Brilliant.

[EMMIE]

I like The Untitled title. This, for some reason, reminds me of when I was in New York and the way people were. In the south they say hello to perfect strangers who pass by. In the north everything is go, go, go and no time for hello lol. Good work!