Salvation.

When I thought all was over,
When I thought the beginning was the end.
When life turned upside down,
And the sun was far from the earth,
When darkness grip my heart,
Encumbering my mind with fear.
Down on my knees I cried,
Praying for heaven to come and help.

When the sky was coming down on me,
When the earth was sinking below my feet,
When the Stars are twinkling darkness,
And the moon turned its back at me..
When my hope was quietly dying,
And rainbows of death overshadowed me,
I called on to my father in heaven,
Who came in haste to rescue me.

Author's Note

Just feel like sharing this.

Thanks for your review.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A beautiful poem of faith Kay. We all need something to pull us back from the brink that can suck us into despair. Very nicely penned.

Chris

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

You are right, Chris.
And thank you so much for your wonderful review.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Kay.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You pack this with urgent emotion as the protagonist tells of the way it felt to be swallowed by desperate unhappiness and to be rescued by his faith. Nicely evocative in tone.

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

Thank you so much, John.
I really appreciate your wise review.