The Method to your Madness

Insainity...

What is it?

Is it your words ripping me apart,

or my tears hitting the ground?

Is it the breaking of my heart?

Am I always going to be bound?

This is the way you like it,

me on my knees crying while you stand above me,

why can't you just quit?

leave me alone and let me be,

but no its not enough to feed your sadistic soul,

whip me with your words,

shoot me with your silence,

everythings okay as long as your in control,

you push me into subsedence*,

you let me freefall,

no guidance,

until i smash into the ground,

then i have to crawl,

your cruel humor keeps me in your trap,

I'm not free untill you have it all,

but you'll never take me,

so i guess i'm stuck here forever... crap

Author's Note

* noun: the sudden collapse of something into a hollow beneath it

> Ignore grammer and spelling

Reviews

[KatiePie]

I loved this, really reading it like my mind was unfolding. :)

[laughinglullaby]

dudee little david i loveee itttt sooooo much "this is the way you like it" that whole section is amazing keep it up

[trainwreck]

Okay so basically this is the most amazing thing I've ever read from you. Its seriously awesome. I have no criticisms or any thing. Seriously this is just so cool. I love it David!!!!