Chapter 3

Chapter 3

A Chapter by I've Killed Lions
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Chapter 3

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    “You all know President Richard Dowling right?.” The man who seemed to be the leader said we were to afraid to speak. All of us gave a slight nod. “Good” he said “Do you know how he became President?.” This time we all shook our heads. “Even better... now if you two fine men” he said turning to the two other men beside him “ would please take these two girls to uh... their rooms it would be greatly appreciate.” His manners and charisma would have been greatly appreciated if I weren’t tied to a chair
“Where are you taking them? Who are you? Why am I here?” Just great blurt out everything on your mind...
“Now boy, one question at a time, your friends are going to their own rooms and don’t worry they won’t be harmed. As for me I will be recognized solely as M and we will get to why you’re here soon enough. Now its my turn for the questions. What is your name”
    So he goes by M and he wants to know my name. I stared at him. Now it was only him and I in the empty room. The light still flickering and making the room seem a lot more creepy. Well, it was either that or the fact that I was here against my own free will and that I was bound to a metal chair.
“My name is David” I said reluctantly
“ Ah David, I know of a David. He did a great many things”
“Really” Now I was a bit more interested “Tell me about him”
“Well, I believe you have heard about David and Goliath”
    Just great using Bible stories. I knew the story from when I went to church almost every week. Actually I went at least three times a week, but after it happened it seemed that everything just fell apart. I stopped going along with a lot of other people.
“Yes, I’ve heard about it”
“Then you know the David I speak of, you remind me of him...”
    Then I was confused. How was I of all people like David, a conquering king who slew a giant? I just looked up at him almost forgetting the situation I was in. His words and questions seemed to poke into my very being. Then I was snapped back into reality by my own thoughts about where I was. I looked up at him
“Why am I here?” I asked


© 2011 I've Killed Lions


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My third chapter, please review and tell me what you think of the story so far

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write more i like it a lot

Posted 13 Years Ago


Keep it up. I like it. Now, a little grammar would be awesome. I can't wait to learn more.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this third chapter. Some history and interesting situations were interesting. I like the story line and the characters. A very strong chapter. I look forward to see where you are taking the story. A excellent chapter.
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Posted 13 Years Ago



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