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Our Skin

Our Skin

A Poem by KeeD
"

Just a poem for someone who inspires me

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The Chair
It sits there
Awaiting my presence

The Artist 
He looks at my canvas
With perceptive eyes 

The Body
Pale like snow 
Ink would make you glow

The Detail
Eyes so deep 
The needle lost in time

Blood Rush
Red with the needles touch
Cheeks blush with pain and pleasure

The Session
Long hours of severe pain
Artistic gain all in your name

The Tattoo
A portrait of you
The description of your beautiful face

The Message
Forever within
A constant reminder of what has been

and

what's to come

Poetic Love
&
Appreciation

I'm a canvas and you my inspiration

© 2014 KeeD


Author's Note

KeeD
A piece on someone who has poetically inspired me.
Ink is permanent, think of it as a landlord always at your door knocking for rent. If it's pretty you don't mind. If it's a mistake like a one night stand on your behind, God help you find an explanation out of that one. :P

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This is how I feel every time I get inked. Some display their art pieces on their walls. I on the other hand display it on my skin. Absolutely beautiful take on the entire process. I constantly ache for the intimate feeling between artist and canvass. Thank you for sharing. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

8 Years Ago

Thank you I really love that you can relate to that intimate feeling of getting inked to this piece... read more



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Ooooh. This is really good. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


KeeD

8 Years Ago

Thanks Holls :)
Lucy

8 Years Ago

Sure.
Beautiful rhyme scheme.
Lovely diction.
A masterpiece beyond words

Posted 8 Years Ago


chandlerl

8 Years Ago

KeeD

8 Years Ago

15 reviews, 3 favorites :P and it's all for you :D going well so far ayy chan?< 3
chandlerl

8 Years Ago

=) wow...
KEE this is awesome man!! It has a smooth flow and your choice of words are great. Well penned my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


KeeD

8 Years Ago

thanks brother haha i'm not happy with it's outcome I've just been blocked lately. Not able to flow .. read more
Rob Santana

8 Years Ago

I think this is really good.
chandlerl

8 Years Ago

me to =)

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Added on January 19, 2013
Last Updated on November 20, 2014

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hi I'm Keegan, most of you talented people on here know me as Kee. I'm 28 and work as a journalist. I write to release bottled feelings, so although it might not be very good, it is me. Thank you for .. more..

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