Bonfires

(turn your volume down to a mellow low) About time I put out something romantic.For those who've found happily ever after, this ones for you :)

Bonfires

 

 

 Days are drifting astray

Light it ablaze, close beside you

Is where I want to stay

On the white sands by the Caspian shores

Looking at the night blend in with the waves

Fragments of shells under our feet

Fearless we lay counting the stars

Bonfires take us away

 

To jazzy skies of grey

Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes

Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours

Love like embers implanted in your cheeks

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze

Romantic music sets the mood to please     

Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Chase after you through the seven seas

Bonfires take us away

 

To a mystical place where the moon and the sun       

Kiss and exchange glances, summer and winter romances

The life within a glimpse of an eye is an eternal lullaby

Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep

Your presence and essence with absence of doubt

Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out  

Bonfires take us away...

...Towards an endless love

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Muse]

I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

[KeeD]

Haha wow you make me so proud of writing :D Like i'll be honest with you muse, I sit down and go to write something and I honestly don't believe in it until I read the reviews on here and I start to question myself... is it really as good as these amazing people say, I mean wow you make me feel proud to write, thank you!!! I loved that line too "Put me to slee, some dreams I forever want to keep" I hope the poem plants an image or reminds people of their fondest memories of being in love :)

[KeeD]

Oh by the way Muse is the font and music distracting?

[Muse]

hell no...the music is superp..you know my taste...I think. If there was singing...I think it can take away from the poet's words. But it's soft...moody..who is this guy he's fabulous!

[KeeD]

Luis oneto, you can find his music on soundcloud.com, Thank you for being so supportive < 3

[Muse]

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
read moreonly tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;

because we will love until the end?

or becaues we love until the end....sorry...grammar is not my thing...can't help but think it's missing a word.

[KeeD]

let me know if this works :3

[Muse]

Yes!!

[A.E. Surdam]

The picture is wonderful. And as always, your poetry always draws me in and captures e in a swirl of emotions and shivers. :)

[KeeD]

Wow thank you :) by the fire is where I want to be < 3

[A.E. Surdam]

Fires are nice. When they are contained that is. Eating hot dogs and drinking soda or tea. Sounds so nice.

[KeeD]

Haha I'm so hungry right now :P I could eat all the hot dogs and Omg I could so treat you to some Indian Chai (tea) it's so yum.. And fire is fire, get to close you get burnt :P I'm someone who likes to get as close to it as I can though, it stirs up the warmth inside of me and makes me feel human and alive.

[A.E. Surdam]

I love hot teas. Especially when they serve it in restaurants. :) And hot dogs right now sound so awesome! P.s. I'm hungry too. It does doesn't it? A fire on a cold spring night sounds extremely pleasant. Though I don't think I can build a fire on my campus. Probably get in trouble. X)

[KeeD]

Haha yeah I don't think I could light a fire in my house either, Still live with my mom she'd definitely light me on fire if I did, Ha. It's been awesome reading your work and getting to know a little about you.

[A.E. Surdam]

Same to you. :)

[DIVYA]

It suffices to say, that this poetry could be an inspiration for many writers to come.

" Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks" - If love was embers, these lines would keep it aglow in someone's heart forever....

Reading this passion play, I drifted off from the beautiful bonfire here, to a far-away, mystical place, I had not visited for a pretty long time. Thanks for the ride Keegan, just so romantic.

[Emily Feret]

wow, amazing. So beautiful. So peaceful and just the imagery was amazing! Great piece, thank you for sharing!

[being me]

you surely know how to entice your readers in every sense of the word...makes me wish i could experience the kind of romance that you've so beautifully portayed...makes us want more...wonderful

[Rob Santana]

Damn Kee you are a very talented writer. Beautiful piece. It reads like some DEFTONES lyrics. Keep em coming.

[Carly]

Great again. I think you could do something really great with the smell of bonfires. They have such a distinct lingering scent. Something great could probably come of that. I usually don't pay much attention to poets on here, but your work gets me every time! Awesome!

[KeeD]

Every time I get a story request I tend to brush it off cause I have limited patience when it comes to reading but I really do enjoy yours and your writing :)

[Carly]

Thanks so much!

[Kajal Gulabani]

Romantic and stupendous.. Beautiful imagery.

[KeeD]

Thank you so much, that's a lovely picture of yourself.

[chaotic katie]

I love this peice the imagery and words just flow so well together, paints a picture. One can feel the emotion in this peice instead of it being just words on a page. You have created a beautiful love story in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading this peice, great work.

[KeeD]

Thank you so much Katie :3

[writing mojo]

this could be smoke/ and fire lyrics, so much is in fabled flames, burning the desire to touch it's amble rearrangement dancing on water, earth and air, elementary to the music of it's crackle in heavenly of illuminate movement..nice piece

[KeeD]

You sir are a genius :)

[Wpww!!!]

Blue foundation has a song named bonfire too!! and spectacular. . .nice poem!

[KeeD]

yes they do :)