Flowers of Saturn

Flowers of Saturn

A Poem by KeeD


Titan

Guided through dreams

On her rocky shores

I soar towards the moon queen

A celestial, I adore

 

Titan your soft curves

Have a crystalline glow

You make my heart swerve

With the beauty you bestow

 

 Enceladus

Enceladus your melting petals

Reflect an icy hue

When your storm settles

It’s the prettiest blue


Magic effused my soul

On this cold harboured moon

Yet again my heart a flower stole

With her snow-kissed bloom

 

Phoebe

Phoebe, the way you sway
Makes your rhythm contrast

A glimpse of your intoxicating ways

Breaking reality into a vision of love unsurpassed

 

Your intoxicating flow

Makes me delve into the dark of space

Behind a mesmerizing afterglow 

I'll gravitate to you under Saturn's embrace


 

 

 

© 2019 KeeD


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

The poem is beautiful and feels like a breath of fresh air, in terms of the imagery (transporting one into another metaphysical dimension), the rhyme-scheme and stanza structure aiding the overall rhythm and flow and wonderful execution.

Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


KeeD

1 Year Ago

Beautiful review, looking forward to checking out your writing when I get home from work. I apprecia.. read more
The style, the imagery, and beautiful words portrayed in this piece have made it another favorite.
Its nice to be back reading your thoughts, your ink....keep writing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful personification. A very enchanting piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


enchanting-ly beautiful ink that weaves a tapestry of wishful romanticism...the originality of imagery leaves an indelible impression upon dreamer’s heart. always a feast for senses to read your art. amazing work ~ x


Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the amazing review
Wow :D I am such a freely mythology nerd. And an astronomy geek. This was a perfect combination!!!
Saturn is the Titan of time and certainly time slowed as I watched this. As I was certainly astounded by this stunning poem. :) nice work.

God, I'm such a nerd lol

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

2 Years Ago

*Greek not freely haha. (even though Saturn is the roman version of Kronos)
KeeD

2 Years Ago

Haha this is a cute review, thanks!
Three of the moons of Saturn. This is beautifully written Kee. It's been a while since I read any of your work, so pleased I came across this one. Eloquent and so poetic in expression. A delight and I thank you.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your warm review. It's been a while since I've spoken to you my friend, hope all is we.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

All OK here and I hope the same for you. :)
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Years Ago

Have just had a second read of these wonderful lines of yours Kee. This is such a very beautiful poe.. read more
Seems you've used knowledge of space to create love in its celestial glory. You have instinctive meter, using sounds as well as specifics. Some truly fine phrasing, 'I’ll sway as we kiss into the dark of space.. .. I gravitate to you under Saturn’s embrace.'

Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely words, appreciate your review fondly
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

Your writing is more than fine.. will read more when i can, promise.
I really like how you used some of the moons of Saturn as prompts for each stanza.

You forgot a few though... she has 62 in total. You should try and add a moon to this poem every once and while. It'd be a cool idea for a long and evolving piece of writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dave Skin

2 Years Ago

Who gives a s**t if no one reads it. A good idea is still a good idea regardless of the general sho.. read more
KeeD

2 Years Ago

Awesome i'll give it a shot! Cheers mate.
Dave Skin

2 Years Ago

I truly look forward to it.

If you don't do it I might steal the idea for myself.
Oh wow! what an imagination! what a creativity! my eyes were wide opened while reading this! You brought the ancient past here, my mind wandered in Gods and Goddess myths, and oh I LOVE those myths, can't help but be helplessly drowned in their alluring mysteriousness, to see You writing all of this but in a modern way is magnificent, it's like You are Saturn and Your woman is floating around You with her many personalities and talents, strong, fragile, passionate, tender... playful, giving, etc... my favorite piece I read from You till now, thank You for sharing it with all of us!

all the best for You, much Love*

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very beautifully done ...:)
I enjoyed reading this wonderful creation...

Posted 2 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

454 Views
10 Reviews
Rating
Added on July 7, 2018
Last Updated on January 7, 2019

Author

KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



About
Hi I'm Keegan, most of you talented people on here know me as Kee. I'm 28 and work as a journalist. I write to release bottled feelings, so although it might not be very good, it is me. Thank you for .. more..

Writing
Mortal Shell Mortal Shell

A Poem by KeeD



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


He will be... He will be...

A Poem by Gee


Versal Law Versal Law

A Poem by Neville