Another state of Garcia

Another state of Garcia

A Poem by KeeD

Another state of Garcia

It feels like I’m stranded

Under suffocating waves

Breathing incessantly

In a halcyon haze

 

I've started at the roots

and visited the moons

Looked myself in the mirror

Trying to figure out the truth

 

A kiss so dry

I lost my mind

to waltz with the macabre

my thoughts redefined

 

the dawn was yours

in immoral shades of azure

Yet you chose to break a heart

and unlock a darker door

 

A noose has a comforting coil

underneath the transcendental eminence

Now to share a relationship with the soil

For its loyalty in permanence 


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© 2019 KeeD


Author's Note

KeeD
A poem about adultery

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Hello Kee, it is lovely to see a post from you and this poem looks at the hurt that can be inflicted as a result of adultery. A little bit of bliss but a heavy price can be paid. Your fourth stanza speaks of a broken heart and unlocking a door to darkness. Your final stanza touches on the guilt with the comfort of a noose. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

8 Months Ago

Hi Christine, what a lovely and insightful review. I'm doing well, how about yourself? It's been a w.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

8 Months Ago

All is good Kee and it is a delight that you still pop in to see us here. So pleased I caught this p.. read more



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A suicide not from a suprned lover in verse as they relive the trauma of a breakup and being cheated on. The only way out left, to die for love. Nicely penned Sir.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Hello Kee, it is lovely to see a post from you and this poem looks at the hurt that can be inflicted as a result of adultery. A little bit of bliss but a heavy price can be paid. Your fourth stanza speaks of a broken heart and unlocking a door to darkness. Your final stanza touches on the guilt with the comfort of a noose. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

8 Months Ago

Hi Christine, what a lovely and insightful review. I'm doing well, how about yourself? It's been a w.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

8 Months Ago

All is good Kee and it is a delight that you still pop in to see us here. So pleased I caught this p.. read more
making love with darkness...in darkness...having we can't have...is that what makes adultery so exciting to some?
perhaps....this one looks into that abyss...with penetrating imagery.
nicely done, kee.
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

8 Months Ago

Thank you Jacob

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KeeD
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Mumbai, India, India



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