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K

A Poem by KeeD

K do you feel relatable

Life gets kind of debatable

They say you are a loner

Some sort of by herself stoner

 

When love does not give you closure

On to the next emotion when the first is not over

You know you are worth it

But nobody is perfect

 

So, you chase your heart into a corner

Suffocating like the corona

I wish I tried with you

But what I did was not right by you

 

So now you sit by the ocean

Trying to appreciate the current and its emotion

Letting the waves crash into your feet

Not letting the world give you one more defeat


© 2020 KeeD


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been here too...felt I didn't give enough to relationships---had regrets later.
Sat alone looking out at an ocean of thoughts...
Closure is so important...but some relationships never achieve it..on either side.
I really like all of the precisely used slant rhyme in this.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

2 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob, love your reviews and hope you, your cat and family are doing well and staying safe. L.. read more



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Raw emotion within this that moves the reader, visceral piece :) It was good to read you today Keegan :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


KeeD

2 Years Ago

Hey Ruth (Poppy), It's glad to see you back again, I'm so happy to see my old friends back on here, .. read more
Ruth

2 Years Ago

All.good thank you Keegan :) Nice to see you about again :)
been here too...felt I didn't give enough to relationships---had regrets later.
Sat alone looking out at an ocean of thoughts...
Closure is so important...but some relationships never achieve it..on either side.
I really like all of the precisely used slant rhyme in this.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

2 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob, love your reviews and hope you, your cat and family are doing well and staying safe. L.. read more

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

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