Incense smoke

Incense smoke

A Poem by Kees Kapteyn

Incense smoke

In a cold room

Ascends heavenward

© 2008 Kees Kapteyn


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ahh... i'm ready to transcend! Word choices are everything in haiku form, spot on :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes it does. You've been burning incense too?

Nice thought provoking write, Kees.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It also produces a heavenly scent!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very good example of Zen Haiku. These few words convey great imagery and a feeling of peace.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Kees Kapteyn
Kees Kapteyn

Ottawa, Canada



About
Resides in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada. Self-published his zine 'rhododendron' and two chapbooks: 'grubstreet' and 'coffee salt.' Has been published in ditchpoetry.com, blueskiespoetry.ca, Novella, Corv.. more..

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