‘Floodgate Feelings’

‘Floodgate Feelings’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Emprisoned feelings run free🌹

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‘Floodgate Feelings’:

Thoughts
Paralyse my mind-

The kind that pierce
The very heart of
Your soul-
Wondering what is
This place and
Time -
What is it
We search to
Find

A dream sometimes
It seems-

The vision of pulsating streams
Bursting forth from the
Centre of your being
So true-

Powerful cascades
Of water
Thrusting out from
Inner turbulence
To rivers of calm-
Where
There can be no
Harm-
Better to have loved
And learnt
Than to have burnt
At every unknown
Emotion-
Bare and raw
Never being released
From unopened
Doors-

I watch the water
Like a waterfall-
Like water from
A spout
Fountains of youth
Being forced out-

White and pure
Longing for more
Of times
Gone by-
Recycled , renewed
Returning

Quenching
That burning-
Igniting the fires
Of love
Cocooned in
Belief
And hopes of
Hearts hanging
From ropes-
Swinging in the winds
Of change-
Does it bear your name?

Is this a foolish
Lovers game-
What is it
That remains
When the river
Becomes tame-
Leaving the heart
Exhausted
And lame

Two connecting as one
Baking under the sun
Parched and bare

We have so much to share

Where does your heart
Wonder-

Does it walk ahead-

Does it ponder-

Does it prepare a way
For the love shared
By two-

New beginnings
And memories
To be made-

Will someone steal you away-
Will you
Stay-
Will your heart
Stray-

Tomorrow is another day

A chance to smile
And be wild
To believe and
Be set free
To dream and
Redeem past
Choices and chances-

Dreams are not what
They seem-
The truth moulding
Us
Holding us-
Preparing us upon
The stage
Where lovers
Lives get played-

A fairytale come true
Set in different hues
Of colour-
Rainbows reflecting
The spirits so bare-

That’s when I knew-

I found you.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
19 February 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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To find final place and to know joy. Miracle or a possibility?
"A fairytale come true
Set in different hues
Of colour-
Rainbows reflecting
The spirits so bare"
I liked the above lines. Simple words with great meaning. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

All things are possible if you believe that’s when miracles occur🌹Thankyou again for your revie.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I need a miracle. I will accept a small one. W wonderful poem dear Kelly and you are welcome.
Very philosophical and poetic. Easy to read and made me intrigued for more.

"Powerful cascades
Of water
Thrusting out from
Inner turbulence
To rivers of calm-
Where
There can be no
Harm-"

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for your time and insight really appreciate it🌹
So many possible scenarios your words paint into one's imaginative flow, Kelly.
It's rare to come across a woman who has enough moxie to be ready for anything.
Excellently spoken on every level one would expect from such a skilled, knowing pen of life and love.

"The vision of pulsating streams
Bursting forth from the
Centre of your being
So true-" Goodness! Sometimes we just know, and in that knowing … well*

Deeply reflective and broadly inclusive to thought, satiating sensation, and wondrous emotion, if a reader cannot relate with and embrace something meaningful in this one, their heart has quit beating.
Smooth as swaying silk in a warm lover's breeze, Kelly✨ … big thank you hugs! ⁓ Richard

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Aii such praise I humbly receive I really appreciate your time and words🌹
Richard🖌

6 Years Ago

And, I humbly bow.
Well well well, hmm I'm touched, touched by the beauty of your art. The flow is beautiful, the form is beautiful, and the meaning is relatable. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou so much I appreciate your time🌹
fireangelpoet

6 Years Ago

No problem!
"Will your heart stray" screamed out to me. I am extremely infatuated by this poem, its amazing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou I’m so glad it stirred your senses, we never know what way it will go but hope and pray f.. read more

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Essex, United Kingdom



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