Wish

I wrote this in 2013 when i was 14 years old, I believe its the first poem i ever wrote that wasnt a school assignment.

I may have never met you but I knew we had a bond
I wish I could just poof you back using a magic wand
I didn't want a brother, I wanted a sister instead
But now that you're gone that's what I wish I never said
You were never given a chance at life
I wish that I could switch
So you could be down here with mom and dad
And I could have my wish

Reviews

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

This poem is really painful and striking!

[RainbowEmerald]

Thank you!

[Chris Shaw]

Sad little poem here of a sibling that didn't make it. A death that has caused pain and regret. If only we had magic wands for these moments

Chris

[RainbowEmerald]

Yes, if only we could all use magic to bring back those we love.

[Pennywriter]

What a striking poem! Even though I have not been through the depicted pain, I can feel your pain. Probably because the wording is a dialogue?

[RainbowEmerald]

Thank you very much!