Fracto Speculo

When my darkest day

Is my brightest night

Only the broken mirror

Will show true sight

Through a horrible dream

In a wonderful nightmare

The mirrors shard

A key to true way

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your message is strong & twisted by some torturous soul affliction in an interesting way. I am not a fan of using bland words like "horrible" and "wonderful" -- you could say that in a more sparkling way, possibly using imagery or comparison . . . "a dream as ugly as satan" . . . "a nightmare as irresistible as me" . . . just to show a couple possibilities (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie