A possible love poem

No sweet words express

my love for you

no grand romantic gestures

were ever made

no sweet words whispered

instead...

it was

heartfelt acceptance

being each other's rock

in times of upheaval

a willingness to try new things

that captured my heart

and made me yours

Ketoma

1/15/2014

Author's Note

My first attempt at writing a love poem

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

this just has endearment...
written all over it...
you give and give...
and the words flow out...
First attempt --- four leaf clover...

[Kellyrose]

Thank you; I never realized how hard it was to write a love poem : )

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...like anything else...once on go for it...its like a bicycle...

[Sami Khalil]

Accept my applause with a hearfelt acceptance...Bravo.................

[Kellyrose]

Thank you, your response is much appreciated

[Sami Khalil]

You poems are much appreciated...Welcome...:).............

[Shaquana Adams]

This is definitely a good first attempt at a love poem. The fact that the poem was the first of it's kind for you doesn't take away from it's quality. Good job. :)

[Kellyrose]

Thank you so much for your kind words

[devon]

"That captured my heart/and made me yours" - great last lines! And for your first attempt at a love poem, you did fantastically at expressing your love!

[Kellyrose]

Thank you so much, I was a little nervous putting it out there :)

[devon]

You are welcome!

[Jack...]

Beautiful Kelly. You already know I think this poem is wonderful. Nicely penned.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you Jack, your encouragement means so much to me

[Jack...]

Are you enjoying it here?

[Kellyrose]

Yes, although I am finding it a little hard to navigate

[Jack...]

What do you need help with?

[Kellyrose]

I guess I am just use to having the people that I friend or follow, their poetry just being available to me to read, now I need to search

[Jack...]

Yes that is different. But the more people you friend the more you will see on the feed and the more who will send you read requests.

[Kellyrose]

Like anything new, it will just take time :) thank you for your help

[Neville]

Well this is a dozen times better than mine, I suggest you keep writing and hey one day, just maybe....
all good things, N

[Kellyrose]

Thank you for your encouragement. I don't feel like a romantic person, so it was different for me

[Neville]

Even better then & believe me, I would not write it if I did not believe it. In my book, people are not romantic but rather, sometimes they might do, say or write something that may be interpreted as being romantic... Very often though interpretations can be way off mark... N

[Brittany Zedalis]

For a first attempt, this is splendid. I adore love poems, and this one is really great.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you. I do not see myself as romantic, so it is really a shot in the dark