In my head

In my head

A Poem by Frito
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Seeing things

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Do you see him?
I know it's quite dim
He's standing right next to me
He can be quite scary
I can hear him creep
Waking me up as I'm falling asleep
He threatens me all day
Saying he'll take me away
I know he'll hurt me too
But I can't tell and warn you
Cause you can't see him
Right through him you'll skim
The doctor thinks I'm crazy
Maybe it's true, it all seems quite hazy
But you would be just as scared
If you could see as he stared
I'm glad you can't see him as I do
Don't worry he won't touch you
He lives in my head as it happens to be
ANd will only end up harming me

© 2022 Frito


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wow.... I really don't know what else to say but wow! I really enjoyed this! I was scared but also intrigued then the last line.. wow it got me!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frito

2 Years Ago

Im so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review:)
i see, you have successfully created a fear with physical features

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 2, 2022
Last Updated on February 2, 2022
Tags: Dark, Depression

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Frito
Frito

NY, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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I'm 18 and I live in New York. Pretty much going through life and wanting to help someone by showing them they're not alone more..

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