The Ocean

In this poem, a brief description of the ocean is exhibited beautifully. I was able to write this because I've experienced the fondness of it. I've written this in the wake of beauty and time.

The ocean being wide and deep,

Serves as a miroir for the natural asterisks,

The anger it has, waves and tides,

It blows and makes l’eau swipe,

The glory it has, being a Panchamahabut,

Dazzles and illuminates watcher’s meinung(eye),

The beauty it has, craved and desired,

Demanded, for not it is a brier,

Of the Ten Commandments it shall posses,

Thou repulse, thou rests,

From the heavens it had come to inspire,

Not a superstition but a lusty desire. 

Author's Note

This poem is a culmination of phrases of different languages (English, Sanskrit, German and French) I hope you all would ignore the complexity of those phrases and focus on the beauty of the poem.
Word meaning
miroir mirror
l'eau water
Panchmahabut emphasizes on the fact that water is a basic element
meinung eye

Reviews

[Thomas Skahill]

I like the blend of languages, it speaks to the growing intricacy of language in the modern age. Too quickly do people revert to English, keep up the inspiring and reaching work.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I at first was seeing words as errors...
but now with your Author's note...
makes a bit more sense...
I see you tried a Coca-Cola theme here...
with the different languages being put forth...