The Gutter of the World

I have no idea what this is that I wrote to be honest

Why?!

Why does she hide behind the long sleeved armor and the chain mail of hate?

self loathing eats at her skin leaving scars for all to see,

and eroding acid of disgust bubbles up from within,

she sits back and watches as the world passes her by,

alone, cold, hiding, and empty.

They who reach out get eaten alive, 

Because alone is where she is and where she shall be,

forever ,

safe in danger, 

comfortable in hate, 

in the gutter of the world.

alone

Author's Note

I'm sorry this is so bad, I just got into writing again. I don't even know what style this is.
Ant help is welcome

Reviews

[judith106]

This is the second of your writings' I have read tonight. I find your words unbelievably familiar.. " safe in danger, comfortable in hate, in the gutter of the world. alone The pain in your words saddens me but you are a talent. Truly!!

[Lyfelucke]

This is a good piece indeed.

[wyrd]

I liked this a great deal. glad you are geting back into writing if this is what the world has been missing in your silence.

[LostandForgotten]

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