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The Gutter of the World

The Gutter of the World

A Poem by LostandForgotten
"

I have no idea what this is that I wrote to be honest

"

Why?!

Why does she hide behind the long sleeved armor and the chain mail of hate?

self loathing eats at her skin leaving scars for all to see,

and eroding acid of disgust bubbles up from within,

she sits back and watches as the world passes her by,

alone, cold, hiding, and empty.

They who reach out get eaten alive, 

Because alone is where she is and where she shall be,

forever ,

safe in danger, 

comfortable in hate, 

in the gutter of the world.

alone

© 2012 LostandForgotten


Author's Note

LostandForgotten
I'm sorry this is so bad, I just got into writing again. I don't even know what style this is.
Ant help is welcome

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This is the second of your writings' I have read tonight. I find your words unbelievably familiar.. " safe in danger, comfortable in hate, in the gutter of the world. alone The pain in your words saddens me but you are a talent. Truly!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a good piece indeed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked this a great deal. glad you are geting back into writing if this is what the world has been missing in your silence.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

any*

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on April 5, 2012
Last Updated on April 6, 2012
Tags: gutter, sad, hidden, alone, poem, scars

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I don't really know what to call what I write other than s**t that spews out of my mind. any help is welcomed if its polite. more..

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