Racism, Racism!!!

Basically about how I feel racism could be stopped

Racism, Racism

Racism, Racism, I've had enough.

Assault or abuse, yeah I know it's rough.

Everybody knows that thwe streets are tough.

Racism, Racism is has to end.

We could call have a friend.

Everyday someone's dying.

Leaving familes hurt and families crying.

Listen you all know that I'm not lying.

Some people have a fear of flying.

People cussing because they are balck or white.

We all know that's not right.

Racism, Racism, nows the time.

When we and the police all put an end to crime.

Racism, Racism, it's such a shame.

When something happens who's to blame?

Racism, Racism, end it now.

How do we end it? We all know how.

Otherwise you'll just hear POW!!! POW!!! POW!!!

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh my friend we have been waging this battle now for years ..
The most shameful,dishonorable sickening thing to call for,is I am better than you
My race and color is by far the superior to yours,so you have to die..and I will live
What stupid things to say..We all know that civilisation was built by all,no race can call it its own
Oh God the world is already on fire..it does not need such calls,stupid and ugly..
It needs to spread acceptance and love to all..its a world for all to live
How I loved your write
lovely write..

[Ama May Cooper]

A great start to your collection. A truthel piece that focuses on a worldwide political and very serious issue amongst mankind.
In parts the ryhming is a little forced, espically the line on flying which dosent really seem to fit in with the rest of the poem at all but otherwise a trumendos piece.
Well done you portrayed your feelings wonderfully about the subject