Sun and moon

Sun and moon

A Poem by Kierstin
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Once again.. I dont really write poems..

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The sun shines

As the earth tilts

We are graced by its presense

When it leaves

The moon surfaces

And night is brought upon us

The cold and eerie air
 

© 2009 Kierstin


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I agree with razormuse. You have great potential.

Posted 13 Years Ago


you may not consider yourself a "poem" writer, but you have great potential! i liked this.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Kierstin
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