Sun and moon

Once again.. I dont really write poems..

The sun shines

As the earth tilts

We are graced by its presense

When it leaves

The moon surfaces

And night is brought upon us

The cold and eerie air
 

Reviews

[Austin Smith]

I agree with razormuse. You have great potential.

[razormuse]

you may not consider yourself a "poem" writer, but you have great potential! i liked this.