Mistress of dusk, mistress of dawn

Here I find myself now 

Alone, cold and bored 

As I describe some of what I saw 

I chant her, poetry to the lonesome road 

She came one night 

When I lost my white blind light 

Not boredom, sympathy nor guilt 

Only a world that we have built 

She entered my garden of souls 

The one and only to dwell my walls 

To rest on an empty throne 

Mistress of dusk, mistress of dawn 

We were old enough to realize 

That we were too young to tell any lies 

As we laughed at our broken dreams 

It was harder than it always seems 

We danced in the shadows of words 

With beams of light we build three worlds 

Never thought we would depart 

Has an end what has a start 

We shared smokes, coffee and wine 

I can't label it but it was divine 

Like a breeze of aromatic cool air 

Soothing my breath and waving her hair 

No more words I can utter 

For I fear the words and the shadows they make 

As my lonesome dawn breaks 

Those shadows without her will break and shutter

Reviews

[Saddam]

We danced in the shadows of words
With beams of light we build three worlds
Never thought we would depart
Has an end what has a start.

beautifully write your past to future and you have created a very loneliness but memorial atmosphere. Love this.

[Janna Nicole]

Beautifully haunting... I think this poem is absolutely lovely.
Thank you for sharing. :) This was a great read.

[Mahoe]

interesting...

[A. Amos]

This is really well done:) great work

[VelvetRosetta]

She entered my garden of souls, that line is wonderful, love it!

[Latifa]

She entered my garden of souls
The one and only to dwell my walls
To rest on an empty throne
Mistress of dusk, mistress of dawn
I love this part, beautifully crafted piece of poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

'As my lonesome dawn breaks
Those shadows without her will break and shutter"
Always a pleasure to read your words. The poem told a sad story. The above lines told the truth. We can become cold and lonely when we learn. We are alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[M.Kilani]

Thank you for your review my friend, it's always a pleasure to read such kind words.
Mohammad