Empty Glass

I did not want to associate this with my other work, I just wanted to write

oh, this Empty Glass

this Empty Glass

i wanted to fill it

with my own blood

but you were there to take the cup away

oh, this Empty Glass

this Empty Glass

i needed to fill it

or at least i thought

until i found someone to take the cup away

Author's Note

all grammar mistakes made on purpose

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:) no explanation needed. it works. perfectly. the poem has messy emotions so it's only right that the grammar be messy as well...sad..but in that ..well, let's just say I know this feeling

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

I like it