The Magnetic Pull

No separation...

It's still there
Buried deep
In the catacombs
Of my Spirit
The aspiration
To become more,
To connect
In due time
I'll be safe and sound
In the arms 

Of my beloved

Reviews

[Lloyd Frieson-Small]

This incorporates a lot of imagery in its simplistic form. I can't help but imagine the profundity of your words if you were to make your poems more lengthy. Excellent read.

[RichGee]

Love your words and tone...great art.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

I know that safe place... magnetic it is. Lovely piece!

[Simon Welsh]

Beautiful, short and sweet. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

[Victoria Kaer]

Very beautiful language, I loved the words you used. It's so great to find someone using uncommon language to create visuals and feelings. Wonderful job.

[Hunter Havoc]

Short yet direct. I like the tone very much! Well done !