The Order Of The Sun

Basking in the golden light...

Phase one
Explosion
A dawn of a new era
Change is imminent
Clouds gather
A storm breaks

Phase two
Darkness
Natural elements scatter
Life seeks shelter
Only the eagles soar,
Higher and Higher

Phase three
Silence
A glimpse of hope
Penetrates
Beyond the horizon
Darkness subsides
Opening the Golden doors
To the Renaissance of Asia.

Author's Note

Celebrating - The Return in i-ching "Fu"

Reviews

[KAin]

Fu - the return... Stating the reciprocal nature of the universe. Things are never completely destroyed, but exist in states of domination and and submissiveness, in varying degrees to their extremes, before the situation reverses - "returns" to its opposing state. Your poem offers a new understanding in this concept. What else might be born in those moments? Hope, maybe. A vivid, well-written piece. Thank you for sharing.

[John Ryan]

I like how simple the story and format is. I think that the free verse of this poem helps add to the greatness Id this poem.

I like how well this poem speaks. You have a lot of talent

[Lloyd Frieson-Small]

Excellence in simplicity. I love this one...

[Sami Khalil]

Uniquely written and conveyed...Bravo..................

[Rob Santana]

Awesome imagery you've layed out here. Nicely done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is such a sweet poem...a vision...

your heart shines through this very personal write.

jacob