The Order Of The Sun

The Order Of The Sun

A Poem by Daydreamer
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Basking in the golden light...

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Phase one
Explosion
A dawn of a new era
Change is imminent
Clouds gather
A storm breaks

Phase two
Darkness
Natural elements scatter
Life seeks shelter
Only the eagles soar,
Higher and Higher

Phase three
Silence
A glimpse of hope
Penetrates
Beyond the horizon
Darkness subsides
Opening the Golden doors
To the Renaissance of Asia.

© 2014 Daydreamer


Author's Note

Daydreamer
Celebrating - The Return in i-ching "Fu"

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Fu - the return... Stating the reciprocal nature of the universe. Things are never completely destroyed, but exist in states of domination and and submissiveness, in varying degrees to their extremes, before the situation reverses - "returns" to its opposing state. Your poem offers a new understanding in this concept. What else might be born in those moments? Hope, maybe. A vivid, well-written piece. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I like how simple the story and format is. I think that the free verse of this poem helps add to the greatness Id this poem.

I like how well this poem speaks. You have a lot of talent

Posted 6 Years Ago


Excellence in simplicity. I love this one...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Uniquely written and conveyed...Bravo..................

Posted 6 Years Ago


Fu - the return... Stating the reciprocal nature of the universe. Things are never completely destroyed, but exist in states of domination and and submissiveness, in varying degrees to their extremes, before the situation reverses - "returns" to its opposing state. Your poem offers a new understanding in this concept. What else might be born in those moments? Hope, maybe. A vivid, well-written piece. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awesome imagery you've layed out here. Nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is such a sweet poem...a vision...

your heart shines through this very personal write.

jacob

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 16, 2014
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Tags: sun, asia, kingdom, renaissance

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