Pearls

Mothers be good to your daughters..

String a pearl on silk thread
And pull tightly,
How long she can hold
To weather the storm
Is a matter of how well
You tie knots..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Lessons. Yes teach your daughters well. They will need to know how to weather the storms. You say so much in this beautifully visual poem. Loved it.

Chris

[Tony]

Yea, slip knots ain't no good.
I enjoyed the message and the poetic language of your poem.

[Jade]

I enjoyed this little gem. nicely written and said

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and those knots are lessons learned along the way, shared from parents to children and then..it is up to the children to keep the thread secure.
j.