Interlude I: A Bone to Pick (A Curse)

Interlude I: A Bone to Pick (A Curse)

A Chapter by Alex Vidmar

      The Bone-man walks tonight, my children.

      To scour the world.

      He watches and waits,

      For someone whom he likes.

 

      Then he sneaks behind them,

      And punches his hand through their breathing bodies.

      From there, he takes the bone he needs.

      Not many, just one, for that’s all he wants.

 

      You see, there are repairs to be done

      On his centuries year old frame.

      The Bone-man is misshapen,

      Out of proportion, and deadly.

 

      He has no skin, just bones,

      Held together by some evil curse.

      He walks this Earth on every night,

      Doing exactly what he knows is right.

 

      He cares not if you are innocent,

      He cares not if you are guilty.

      If he chooses you,

      Don’t try to run.

 

      You see, there are repairs to be done

      On his centuries year old frame.

      The Bone-man is misshapen,

      Proportion-less and deadly.

 

      He has a bone to pick with you,

      And everyone he deems right.

      He even takes bones from animals,

      Be ready for a sleepless night.

 

      Remember, my children,

      If you see him coming,

      That you do not run,

      And you do not scream.

 

      For the Bone-man wants the bone he’s picked.

      Your bone he’ll take from you.

      The Bone-man walks tonight, my children,

      And he’s coming after you.

 

      He has a bone to pick with you,

      And everyone he deems right.

      He even takes bones from animals,

      Be ready for a sleepless night.



© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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This is interesting. Very melodic in nature, and definitely dark and haunting. It reminds me of old adages told to children such as "don't go into the woods at dark by yourself." It also reminds me of Freddy Krueger for some reason? Haha, my mind works in mysterious ways. But I'll look forward to reading more of your work!

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A nice poem. I like the story of the Bone-man. The story is getting more better and entertaining with each chapter. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

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This is very interesting, I like how you started off your pome, an i realy thought it was great

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is interesting. Very melodic in nature, and definitely dark and haunting. It reminds me of old adages told to children such as "don't go into the woods at dark by yourself." It also reminds me of Freddy Krueger for some reason? Haha, my mind works in mysterious ways. But I'll look forward to reading more of your work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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