Stairway

Stairway

A Chapter by Alex Vidmar
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Inspired by Led Zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven"

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Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.

No matter how much
I try to fight,
I'm pulled up higher,
Destined for endless flight.

Upon the whispering wind,
Are carried truth and sin.
These two words have a very fine line between
Because you know, words have two meanings.

Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.

Each time it takes over,
I climb one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
Up to Heaven.



© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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Inspirational poetry from a beautiful song, I loved the flow, and the pleasant, uplifting feelings. I particularly enjoyed the last two stanzas, because they were unique, the way you made them sound similar, and yet so different. Flawless write, enjoyed reading.

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I reminder to me that every desicion, every choice brings us one step closer to our dooms. All the more reason to live life to the fullest!

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I LOVE THIS. especially since I love that song as well. it definitely went with the theme :)

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I like how you repeated the last two verses... It added a very haunting effect.
Very nice read, well done :)

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This is amazing. I love it. :) (But what else is new? I always love your writing)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wonderfully penned. It feels as though I am climbing steps to a paradise I so long for.

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Great flow and imagery. Nicely done!

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love it

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great job here. Just loved it. Great imagery and flow.

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Simple, good flow, well written. Fine work.

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I love it.

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Alex Vidmar

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