Stairway

Stairway

A Chapter by Alex Vidmar
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Inspired by Led Zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven"

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Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.

No matter how much
I try to fight,
I'm pulled up higher,
Destined for endless flight.

Upon the whispering wind,
Are carried truth and sin.
These two words have a very fine line between
Because you know, words have two meanings.

Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.

Each time it takes over,
I climb one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
Up to Heaven.



© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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Inspirational poetry from a beautiful song, I loved the flow, and the pleasant, uplifting feelings. I particularly enjoyed the last two stanzas, because they were unique, the way you made them sound similar, and yet so different. Flawless write, enjoyed reading.

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A hihgly emotional and personal piece, well done, good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is really good! "I find myself one step higher. Climbing that stairway, That Stairway into Heaven." is my favorite part of this. Actually, this is better than really good. It's indescribable. Bravo.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I don't know that song, but this is an excellent poem for sure!:)
Great!


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great work! I love it! =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Third stanza is truth, humanity.
Nicely written poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love that song. This is a really great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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The details and flow of this poem delicately pull towards you upward toward the top of these winding stairs. I like the wording and the feeling in this piece.

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Alex Vidmar

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