My Mistress' Eyes Are Something Like The Sun

Brand New Mrs!

MY MISTRESS' EYES ARE SOMETHING LIKE THE SUN

My mistress' eyes are somethng like the sun
Stars are more delicate in her eye
Sparkling bright like the rainbow in her colon
If lips are red, led in her lips as I
Have seen flower shrink and died
But no such flowers seen I in her smile
And in her performs I'm delighted intensed
Than the ray of the sun from mile
Away I love to see her shine, I know
Her ears have more rhythm to her sounds
A radiance drawing moon into her meter, I own
My mistress before she came, she's brands
            And now, by heaven I swore I bought her love
            As anything else, with no comparison, move

Reviews

[Richard 🍃]

Though, your syntax is quite odd to the normalcy of English speech, I think I got the gist in that which you're saying of the one whom you love and adore.
Romantic expression, in any tongue, is at the heart of affectionate poetry … in this sense, I feel certain your "Mistress" is more than suitably warmed by such sweet admiration of yours for her.

Thank you for sharing this sincere-feeling poetic effort, Sir Poet! ⁓ Richard

[Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka]

Thank you so so much, Sir Poet! Richard. I do appreciated your wanderful review.

[shyla]

Beautiful, many people look for the words to describe a loved one and have issues you did fantastic.

[Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka]

Thank you so much.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautifully cryptic and poetic! It held me from beginning to end.

[Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and beautiful poetry for love my friend.
"And now, by heaven I swore I bought her love
As anything else, with no comparison, move"
Yes when some excite the heart and soul. We have found utopia. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

[Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka]

Thank you so much, Sir! I appreciated your comments.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Ruth]

Beautifully done...vibrant visuals and sentiments, woven with grace :)

[Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka]

Thank you, Ruth, I really appreciated your comments.

[Lydia]

No, there is no comparison to love.....or to the one you love. A clever take on the sonnet....and congratulations on your marriage! Good one. Lydi**

[Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka]

Thank you, Lydia for good comment. But, I'm not yet.

[Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chu..]

PARODY OF SHAKESPEAREAN SONNET.