My Mistress' Eyes Are Something Like The Sun

My Mistress' Eyes Are Something Like The Sun

A Poem by Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka
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Brand New Mrs!

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MY MISTRESS' EYES ARE SOMETHING LIKE THE SUN

My mistress' eyes are somethng like the sun
Stars are more delicate in her eye
Sparkling bright like the rainbow in her colon
If lips are red, led in her lips as I
Have seen flower shrink and died
But no such flowers seen I in her smile
And in her performs I'm delighted intensed
Than the ray of the sun from mile
Away I love to see her shine, I know
Her ears have more rhythm to her sounds
A radiance drawing moon into her meter, I own
My mistress before she came, she's brands
            And now, by heaven I swore I bought her love
            As anything else, with no comparison, move

© 2016 Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka


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Though, your syntax is quite odd to the normalcy of English speech, I think I got the gist in that which you're saying of the one whom you love and adore.
Romantic expression, in any tongue, is at the heart of affectionate poetry … in this sense, I feel certain your "Mistress" is more than suitably warmed by such sweet admiration of yours for her.

Thank you for sharing this sincere-feeling poetic effort, Sir Poet! ⁓ Richard

Posted 1 Year Ago


Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka

1 Year Ago

Thank you so so much, Sir Poet! Richard. I do appreciated your wanderful review.
Beautiful, many people look for the words to describe a loved one and have issues you did fantastic.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Beautifully cryptic and poetic! It held me from beginning to end.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Wonderful and beautiful poetry for love my friend.
"And now, by heaven I swore I bought her love
As anything else, with no comparison, move"
Yes when some excite the heart and soul. We have found utopia. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Sir! I appreciated your comments.
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
Beautifully done...vibrant visuals and sentiments, woven with grace :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Ruth, I really appreciated your comments.
No, there is no comparison to love.....or to the one you love. A clever take on the sonnet....and congratulations on your marriage! Good one. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Lydia for good comment. But, I'm not yet.
PARODY OF SHAKESPEAREAN SONNET.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on September 25, 2016
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Tags: Love, Youth, Passion, Zeal, Exuberant, Friendliness, Chaste, Marriage

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Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka
Onyia-ota, Kingsley Chukwuebuka

Enugu, Eastern, Nigeria, Nigeria



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A student, from University of Nigeria, Nsukka. In love with writing Poems, Short stories and Play and (Novel*) Note: Poetry can not be subjected to any single definition. We know, of course, ther.. more..

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