Yours Forever

Yours Forever

A Poem by Zoya Sahai

I know you're around me,
as the hushed whispers
of the rustling leaves tell me.
I grin, as I feel your presence
and promise to be
yours forever.

I know you yearn to touch me,
as the velvety silver gown of the moonlight,
caressing my skin, tells me.
I blush as I feel your touch
and promise to be
yours forever.

I know you crave to love me,
as the scent of the red rose
in my garden tells me.
I smile, as I breathe in
the fragrance of your love
and promise to be
yours forever.


© 2013 Zoya Sahai


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This is a wonderful piece,Zoya.
I must give you credit for writing so eloquently.
Repeating the lines,"and promise to be
yours forever' thrice in three stanzas magnified the strength of your feeling of love.
I congratulate your write and hope you will come with more creative pieces.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow. that is all i can say. this poem breaks my heart and fills me with love all at once. i was going to comment on the first few lines because they are so deep and loaded but as i moved through the poem i couldn't give more emphasis to just those two lines as the entire poem speaks volumes

Posted 7 Years Ago


Zoya Sahai

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!
This is one beautiful poem! Loved the way you metaphorized your loved one's love for you into nature's agents. It created a warm and comforting feeling in my mind. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This could be the perfect poem sung while saying 'yes' to your long-time lover. A great adore for someone who wants you to be their's forever.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Zoya Sahai

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review!! :)
Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

:-) Review my pieces when you get time :-)
Hey....it touched my heart, Wish i could too fall in love one day. Really Zoya!! I must say a word. Once more...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow. I just saw this poem. It holds so much beauty and promises of love...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


You sense his feelings for you just as you sense the nature around you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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lovely written.....you've a talent...loved here one phrase much....

I know you yearn to touch me,
as the velvety silver gown of the moonlight,
caressing my skin, tells me.
I blush as I feel your touch
and promise to be
yours forever................well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Filled with lot of emotions:)
love is something you can't resist from...
Nicely written piece :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful piece,Zoya.
I must give you credit for writing so eloquently.
Repeating the lines,"and promise to be
yours forever' thrice in three stanzas magnified the strength of your feeling of love.
I congratulate your write and hope you will come with more creative pieces.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has a sense of gentleness and loving sincerity. A refreshing read, compared to the so often almost hostility toward love that one comes across so often within this site. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Zoya Sahai
Zoya Sahai

Jalandhar, Punjab, India



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I am a medical student and I love poetry. I am a shy person by nature but poetry is one means I have always expressed myself. I like debates and elocution. My choice of profession is such that I fee.. more..

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