"Empty"

tried out a different style of writing with this one...hope you like it

Empty,
Nothing left to me,
Nothing on the outside,
No feelings within,
An empty sorrow,
An empty bottle of booze slips through my fingers,
You have gone away from me,
Yet once again I rise,
I rose up from this state once before,
i can do it again,
Though you are not here to lift me up...


Sorrow,
That fills my tears,
Lines my eyes with wetness,
Freezing on impact with the cold morning breeze,
My memories remain of our times,
But the feelings long gone,
Will i find another,
Hopefully yes,
But sorrowfully i doubt one will be as great,
As you were to me...


Darkness,
Setting in over my soul,
My mind left to wander the cold corridors,
Nothing but a ghost beside myself,
A ghost of my past,
You have haunted me for years,
Yet you still donot sway,
Why wont this feeling leave,
Why wont it stay away...


Love,
Is the only think to keep it at bay,
My feelings for another,
Yet that other still stands,
No one is here,
No one can hear me cry,
I still cry myself to sleep,
But not for her,
No,
Not for my memories,
But for the emptiness that resides,
The emptyness of my heart,
For no one is here,
For i am alone,
In the emptyness of my own sorrow....

Reviews

[Courtney]

i like it thats how i feel about my ex-g/f and b/f