Always Refuse

Always Refuse

A Poem by Kitten
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Just something I came up with late one night and decided to upload.

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You say you’re tired of the games

Say it’s me; I’ll take the blame

Under earth, sky, and flame

I chose a fire that won’t be tamed

I choose for things to always change

Yet, the laughable fact remains

I will always refuse the chains

You say I’m heartless, cold, and vain

I say I’m nothing but a stain

I will mark the ground with fame

Screaming people will call my name

Maybe in pleasure or in pain

Yet, the laughable fact remains

I will always refuse these chains

You say you’re hurt, you say I’m strange

I’m a mask that only feigns

True emotions never came

Forced honest answers down the drain

My heart, my soul you’ll never gain

You’ll try your best and I won’t complain

But, the laughable fact remains

I will always refuse those chains.

© 2010 Kitten


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I absolutely love the rhythm of this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This could be an AWESOME rap...

Posted 11 Years Ago


*dies* This is AMAZINGGGGG!

Posted 11 Years Ago


So... apparently you've been hiding your talent from me all this time? Damn, kitten. This is intense. *throws it in my favs pile*

Posted 11 Years Ago


I forgot to mention; Great write Heather...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cleverly written your words hit the
mark one after the other. Although
me personally would have broken this
down into stanza some people could
savor each tasty morsel.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, you are an amazing writer from what i can see so far. I love your passion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nicely written. the rhymes don't seem forced, and flow great i particularly like the use of metephor and symbolism you used. all in all a awesome poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: chains, feelings, relationships, situations

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Kitten
Kitten

Sedona, AZ



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A demented mind. Obsessed with torture, horror, painted lips, and feint touches. Call me a Sadist. I go by the name Kitten. Don't be surprised if I have a nickname for you, I'll generally forget your .. more..

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