Di-sap-point

Words carefully chosen for the twine

Heart elevated for the connection

Yet lost in translation was the truth

The disappointment was the proof.

Read and misunderstood

Perhaps read but never concluded

Clear but murky to his senses

The sap has gone to wastes..

Romance turns a tad tougher

Communication rises one level higher

Sight gave way to night of emptiness

Baby.. What does your heart tell you?

Reviews

[BrokenAngelicHeart]

Well... Di-sap-point, was to show that the sap in something else was completely missed by the intended reader, the point lost.

Read it like this,

Dear, I...disappoint...sap...no point..

When a person is crying... Their words get disjointed, and only pieces are heard..or in this case, read.

[Pearls Of Wisdom...Youn..]

A piece i found refreshing to my poetic bones

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A very eerie wording point, flow is sometimes broken but the stark imagery lends the reader some credence, well written.

[Chris]

Yet another interesting poem written by BrokenAngelicHeart. Its the perfect discription of an arguement.