Left Behind

You left me behind

To stand on my own

You didn't say goodbye

No emotion was shown

I'm tired of waiting

For you to come back

You left me behind

Now my heart has turned black

I hope you know what you have done

You will never see me smile again

But as I look back

Did I ever have a reason to smile?

Author's Note

Even now I still remember when and why I wrote this. And more importantly, who I wrote it for.

Reviews

[kewlbluetiger]

Wow. Really strong. Captured the resentment from being abandoned. There's an authenticity in your writing that you promise in your profile and deliver right here. That takes courage! Nice write. I enjoyed it.

[just is]

I like it, It's simple and to the point as well as full of hurt, well written.