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A Poem by Kitty

 

Where is everyone?
Can anyone hear me?
I’m drowning here.
Is there anyone who will help me?
Anyone who will listen
To my cries of anguish,
Cries of panic?
Where are you?
Why won’t you answer me?
Why won’t help me?
Why don’t you care?
Please, I beg of you,
Listen to my calls
Of utter fear and desperation,
Please,
Oh please,
Help me,
Before it’s too late.
 
Copyright©JosieWentzel01August2009
 

© 2009 Kitty


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Powerfully emotional writing, though the last line simply haunted me. How many live on that edge.. with just a moment or two to save them.. You really reach so deeply into the heart and soul!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your poem strongly conveys the feeling of despair, to the reader. Of sinking deeper into oneself, with a safety net to catch us. Sadly, i know too well, these feelings that your poem talks about. Hoping writing this poem, has offered you, the release, needed for healing. Thank you for sharing this very emotional and personal poem with us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


you are describing my life ..... amazing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very good the pain and fear is expressed and had me caught from the beginning. Really nice write!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kitty
Kitty

Weltevredenpark, Johannesburg, South Africa



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Finding peace has always been a struggle for me. But if there is one thing I can wish for the world, it's peace, love, more tolerence, faith, hope and trust. I hope you find it somewhere out there.... more..

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