No Way

No Way

A Poem by Kitty

 

Today I wished my life away.
I cried and pleaded, to God I prayed.
I had just had enough of not being wanted –
Feeling as though my emotions were being taken for granted.
All I wanted was for him to understand
That I’d do anything for him, just because he’s my man.
Oh but to get that message across the floor,
I ended up feeling like he didn’t want me anymore.
I felt my world crash down around me!
A life without him – this cannot be!
And so I wished to die today,
Because living without him – there’s just no way.
 
Copyright©JosieWentzel13July2009

© 2009 Kitty


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oh... a very deep and emotional write but very powerful to me.... i enjoyed this one alot.... overall a very amazing write!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

liked it usually can t stand rhyming poetry. enjoyed the honest display of pain we ve all felt. love d the title. liked the first line. favorite line... oh but to get that message acrosss the floor. the lines worked together very well as a whole. a succint beauty this poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a very nice write, In the line third from the bottom though wouldn't it be A life without him?

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Kitty
Kitty

Weltevredenpark, Johannesburg, South Africa



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Finding peace has always been a struggle for me. But if there is one thing I can wish for the world, it's peace, love, more tolerence, faith, hope and trust. I hope you find it somewhere out there.... more..

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