Welcome to my World

Welcome to my World

A Poem by Kitty


In the world of Josie
Things are never right, you say –
There’s never just black and white,
But instead always grey.
And in this world of mine
It seems that all is lost;
Seems like all I want to do is fight
No matter what the cost.
You seem to think
That I like to sulk and complain,
But sometimes I need you to stop and listen
To my cries of pain.
Have you ever thought
That it’s your help I’m asking for?
Ever wondered why
I cry more than I did before?
Maybe your perception of my world
Hits off the mark ever so slightly.
Maybe you take my so-called tantrums
Far too lightly.
Maybe one day you’ll see
How much I hate crying these tears.
Maybe one day you’ll understand that losing you
Over a stupid fight is one of my worst fears.
Until then
Allow me to introduce you to my world;
To this sometimes grey and lonely
Home of a broken girl…

© 2009 Kitty

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WOW you are a very talented writer,
This is amazing, I loved this write.
I can feel the raw energy in this write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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this was a really well rhymed poem. Your emotion is raw. well penned

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You write with a depth of experience and pain... taking us into a world so overwhelming at times... What a powerful, emotional write...

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow a very deep and powerful piece lots of emotion bulit up in this one....overall i thought i was expressed well.. Iliked this alot .. nice work!!!

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4 Reviews
Added on September 18, 2009



Weltevredenpark, Johannesburg, South Africa

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