Love

Love is like the wings of a butterfly.

Fragile but beautiful.

But then love turns into the wings of a moth.

Still fragile but plain.

Soon the moth falls to the ground.

The devil and his minions apear,

They dance upon the moth until it is broken and dead.

Just like love.

Author's Note

Sorry if it seem's kinda sucky. Just woke up though.

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

I liked the analogy until the devil part. I don't know why. Still there is always improvement in every work that could be done. Especially in mine. But for being twelve this is great!! Mature analogy for a young age. It's sweet. I love the last line. Nice job.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i like the metaphors here

[13ReasonsWhy]

absolutely beautiful....

[paparapapa]

Interesting analogy. Good job. ;)

[TheKaylaPup]

I really like the butterfly analogy, it sets it apart from other heartbreak poems, still sad though.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such a captivating and mature insightful write...another stunner!!!

[SwagMaster]

I loved it, was a great read