The Best Poem

The Best Poem

A Poem by KittyStarr1101
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What is the best poem?

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What is the best poem?
Does it defy evil,
Or does it run with it?
Is it filled with kisses and hugs?
It could also have a twist,
Right in the middle.
Or shall it part with death,
And flourish inside life.
But instead of thinking what the best poem is,
And when it will surface,
Why don't we think about who shall create it?
Shall it be God,
Or will it be Satan.
Maybe the creator isn't even alive.
But to who is this, 
Great poet,
We wait in wonder,
Waiting for you to arrive,
And amaze us with the best poem ever.   

© 2011 KittyStarr1101


Author's Note

KittyStarr1101
Really tired so just wrote

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The title is definitely an eye-catcher and I think the subject of this poem is interesting. This leaves me thinking which is the best poem or is there really one? haha. i don't know. Anyway, in my opinion, this needs some editing, like 'poemist' to 'poet.' However, I'm only an amateur when it comes to poetry so I don't really know the technicalities - if this is allowed or not. But if it is allowed, then don't mind me. haha. But, still, great write. And keep on writing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Certainly caught my attention with the title, but I didn't lose interest. The poem got me thinking. Too bad I don't think there is one best poem. Too many great ones already and new coming along!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i wonder about this too...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like how this starts, in fact I like it all the way through and then it seems like you wanted it to end, so it did. And It is clear that you ended it, but, i think it could have a stronger ending. Awesome idea too. Keep writing Kitty-Starr even if you're tired. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


You think so deep, truly amazes me....and everything is relative in my opinion...brilliant work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


The title is definitely an eye-catcher and I think the subject of this poem is interesting. This leaves me thinking which is the best poem or is there really one? haha. i don't know. Anyway, in my opinion, this needs some editing, like 'poemist' to 'poet.' However, I'm only an amateur when it comes to poetry so I don't really know the technicalities - if this is allowed or not. But if it is allowed, then don't mind me. haha. But, still, great write. And keep on writing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 11, 2011
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Tags: poem, confusion, love, romantic, children, dreamy, past, future, emo, goth, dark, cloudy, rain, beautiful

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KittyStarr1101
KittyStarr1101

Bikini Bottom, IL



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I am 12, quite enjoy writing. I have a Kitty soul so therefore ; I am a kitty. I know what your thinking - but, you look like a human - well I have a Kitty soul trapped in a human body. I attend Churc.. more..

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