I See It All

I See It All

A Poem by ~Death Is The Key~

i see your smile

i see your faking

i see your lies

i see it all

your nothing but a lie

nothing more but a fake

you say this and that

but is it real?


nothing you say is

not anymore

you lied

and died

made me feel pain

made me cry

made me relize

your not real

your not here

your nothing

so go away

die in a corner

i don't care anymore

you lied

not just to me

but everyone

Good bye.

© 2011 ~Death Is The Key~

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~Death Is The Key~
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This is an excellent poem.
i can see the resentment but also in the repeatitivness the struggle to let go, to finally say goodbye.
nice work,

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem. I think you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 6, 2011
Last Updated on May 20, 2011


~Death Is The Key~
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