And She Wrote

It is a cruel world, 

One that eats away at her heart.

She knew in her heart, that she was going to break.

So she picked up a pen, and placed words on paper,

And with every stroke the weight in her heart grew lighter.

She wrote to escape the world that picked and pulled at her soul

She wrote to express the endless feelings that had been captive to her mind for so long,

and she wrote to find herself.

Author's Note

Please tell me if you like my work or not. Any feedback is good feedback :).

Reviews

[katie]

I really love this! I think this would be a great introduction for a writer. Very visual, I don't have to pick through symbolism and I like that.

[Arya]

I can totally relate to this, writing really helps me express myself and cope up a lot!!Lovely poem!

[BlackPrince]

I love this poem. I can relate to it because, as a poet, I am so glad to label myself a wordsmith. I consider writing a miraculous gift, the way our thoughts, which are spirit, can manifest themselves on paper through a pen; the whole process, the act of writing, still amazes me.

So you have captured that necessity to express our inner world; and it makes us feel fulfilled like self therapy, and writing poetry, for me, is the best therapy.

WELL DONE!

[costa siwale]

incredible, well written.
good work

[Avia]

I have no words, just lovely. Well done

[Kiwi.jh]

Thank you so much!

[Avia]

You're welcome. I'm glad I read it.

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

Ooh... I like it... I understand this.

[KCthelastboyscout]

You write to reveal what's inside you.mind body heart and soul.that's the most important part reading this story.I can feel what's inside you.thanks for sharing. *special thanks for your kind review*

[Figaro]

I feel like this describes perfectly that first discovery of catharsis when you first begin to write, keep going!

[Kiwi.jh]

Thank you! Glad you liked my writing. Look forward to reading some of yours as well.

[Planet x]

I like it , its simple but you expressed how poetry can be an escape , a release of emotions

[Kiwi.jh]

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it!

[An owl on the moon]

This helped me see so well the beautiful process of writing, of poetry flowing from the soul, of the healing it brings us. It is truly like some enchantment to release the darkness from us and make it light.

[Kiwi.jh]

thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.