You made me

You made me

A Poem by Kt k
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You eye looks over me in a glaze
I am invisible to a naked eye
Seen only through a glass eye
You expect me to be a certin way
You judge me to be what im not
I act the way you expect
The way i am not
this is the lie you judge me to be so
this is the lie you made me into
I am what you saw through you hazy eyes
i became what you expected
Your judgement is my cruel reality
i am what i am not
For what you see is a lie
But even the lie you can not see

© 2014 Kt k


Author's Note

Kt k
If u judge me to be a certain way i will act the way you want me to be this is what i was trying to explain in this poem but i am not fake

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I really like this :-) Very powerful. Creative and lots of heart. Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kt k

9 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and then right a review It means a lot
I really like this poem - I assume the use of the I verses i is to emphasize your point. If it is not, it definitely comes across that way.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kt k

10 Years Ago

Yes i was trying to emphasize the point across but now looking back onto this poem i think i might m.. read more

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Added on December 12, 2013
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A lot of people have told me that someday i will be a writer but even more have told me not pursue it that am not good enough after hearing this from the ones you are your advisers your support syste.. more..

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A Poem by Kt k