The Fog

The Fog

A Poem by Kleio13

Contusions have quite a thrill , especially when they paint my throat
clouding music,
I'm just a fulcrum away from climbing to pain

it's almost SyFy,
this love speaks fiction
i know it sounds cheesy, but at least these mental interludes will go unnoticed

i crawled to talking walls, the wood floors bring me fairytales,
"silly girl, you brought this on yourself."
His apologies scream in my ear,


the Fog , haha, you're too sweet, even sweeter when the cranium meets a pale jaw

lovely candy bricks, the contusions I still face, i guess I'm used to it.
the most pathetic morsel  in my life, a severed man begging for mercy.

© 2015 Kleio13


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Kleio13
All of my poetry is original and copyrighted.

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This is an intricate piece. This piece ties imagery that doesn't go together, usually. This talks, I think, about a relationship, but it's hidden in this, either a light horror story, or dark science fiction. Great job with this one. Thank you for your creativity.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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courage weds stupidity in abusive relationships .. lots and lots between your lines ... makes me want to rescue :{ your "edge" is loud, clear and as sharp as ever!
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Kleio13

8 Years Ago

Thank you E
Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

:) ............ Hi Kleio!!! so nice to know you are here!
Kleio13

8 Years Ago

I missed you E!!!!
Well, I needed a mental interlude to process the sheer rawness of this piece. You are a fearless storyteller my dear, which is great. Another hard-hitting and intense piece that resonates after the read :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


great work. Like the candy bricks idea. relationships. pain. truth. beautiful. x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very intricate and metaphorical. I like this a lot!! Great work on modern day expression of poetry, very well done. Props!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice piece, it moved me and in a way speaks of a relationship gone bad...Excellent imagery and choice of words--well done, thank you for allowing me to read your poem which I find outstanding!

Posted 10 Years Ago


it's almost SyFy,
this love speaks fiction -- I love these lines...in reading, I found myself smiling and nodding my head.

Another piece that I think really comes to life when read aloud. You have a talent for creating pieces that have a certain beat and flow that begs to be read. The darkness and grit that you paint with your images are quietly juxtaposed with the power and strength of your words. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is an intricate piece. This piece ties imagery that doesn't go together, usually. This talks, I think, about a relationship, but it's hidden in this, either a light horror story, or dark science fiction. Great job with this one. Thank you for your creativity.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 12, 2013
Last Updated on February 28, 2015
Tags: abuse, digression, reality

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Kleio13
Kleio13

San Bernardino, CA



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I'm a passionate poet and a devoted writer and I live in southern California. I am also looking for devoted writers be friends with. Feel free to message me! more..

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