Cadaver

Pin me up

I`m an immortal

    doll

dying for osteoperosis,

    a bony dalilah

skin graphs isn`t even an art; it`s an invasion of privacy

My privacy- being a flyleaf

   a rock up a nose

   a soon-to-be-dried-up-rose

     I`m just his warm body

a snap pea

   when the morning drears

               red

    melodramatic,

No doubt, patch my ears

 with an xylophone

at least A,B,Cs makes sense

My privacy - spiritual 

    keenness

  lost between

    bedsheets

I choke in my dreams now,

only to wake up in my 

earphones twirled around my neck

Deaf takes such initiative to stone

Then there is sight- I see me-

ghost me under a size fifteen blade

      of psychobabble

Not long after octo

The only fortune to 

have is sanity.

Author's Note

I have`nt written any new works since April until I wrote this a couple of days ago, so the writing skills could be lacking.All of my poetry is original and copyrighted.

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

No, your skills are evident for miles my friend...No doubt, patch my ears / with an xylophone /at least A,B,Cs makes sense...that bit alone makes this poem a winner...your style is stark and lacerating...I knew I was reading a dark piece, but the end is especially ominous...that psychobabble can be just as dangerous as and cutting as a blade sometimes...I'd love to get to your coffeehouse and hear you read some of this stuff and see how you deliver it, a pity I'm so far away cuz your stuff just naturally lends itself to a voice...great and thought-provoking as always K.

[Kleio13]

As always , I enjoy reading your reviews and it always captivates me to desire to write more because I want to be the voice that not everyone has. It is a dark piece- but it`s a confessional one.
My testimony lives in my writing.

[kublakhan27]

It's probably no secret now that that is my favourite kind of poetry, and the only kind I can seem to write myself for the life of me...but you do have a unique voice that is all your own, one of the most unique on the site :)

[Kleio13]

Thank you very much Kubby :)

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure my friend :)

[Frieda P]

Pin me up
I`m an immortal
doll
dying for osteoperosis,
a bony dalilah

That alone and I was dumbfounded, in the best way! When you come back, you do it with a vengeance woman, love this!

[Kleio13]

hahaha thank you Frieda! I love you

[Einstein Noodle]

so glad to see you are posting Kle ..may i call you Klee? ..first verse is very good says i .. may i suggest skin graphs are .. or skin grafting is .. ( i know .. hell is in the details)
third verse is this marvelous contrast of warmth and snap peas .. and thank you for drears .. so very wonderful! ..
and when i reach the end .. i says to me .. go back again .. :)
good fortune Kleio13
keep your feet up and do school .. but dont forget us ;)
E.

[Kleio13]

hahaha just call me Kleio. And thank you very much. I love your reviews

[A. Amos]

Lot of work going on in this piece and enjoyed the end with great message, great write my friend

Just amend typo for Osteoporosis!

[Kleio13]

haha thanks!