Porcelain Shell

It's my pastel goth sad poem<3

Cracks of ray lines,

Linger through my hard shell.

My coldness sets off smoke into my crystal walls.

Lining up to my dark eyes I close them.

To measure the pressure within my walls.

Breathe is nonexistent in my darkest cave.

Porcelain and despair is all I gain...

Author's Note

So I felt like my pastel goth side needed to show itself and here it is.I got bored and decided to show a girl who is wrapped around darkness with the feeling of a lonely doll. I hope you like it<3

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me of a bird in a cage. Locked up too tightly never allowed to fly.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks Who knew my poems were more likeable lol

[Poetic Beauty]

I really liked it

[Pink Pastel]

I am glad^-^

[Eric]

Wow, great stuff! Really made me think deeply

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you so much

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Amazing work! "My coldness sets off smoke into my crystal walls" this is my fav line in the poem. Keep up the good work.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your porcelain shell is very strong it echoes in the readers head with questions unsolved. Great Job!

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks ^-^ just my feelings ha ha.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your Feelings are on the star

[Pink Pastel]

The star???

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The star!!!

[Pink Pastel]

Okay thank you

[DRAGO]

It is a good poem, gothik

[HeyJadeXO]

I enjoy this poem very much. Great job!

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you am glad

[iamshadowine]

I really admire the way you've written the poem... Its quite creative :) I loved reading the poem
Keep writing

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you and happy Halloween ^:)

[iamshadowine]

Happy Halloween ^•^

[Lord of mad men]

This is a nice read. I enjoyed your word choose very much and it is very nicely written. It was a nice read. Great job. Yours truely a mad lord

[Pink Pastel]

thank you happy darkness day^-^