Refuse

We will not quit 

Until we taste victory 

We will not surrender 

Until we change history 

Tonight when we fight 

We refuse to lose 

Tonight when we fight 

We make no excuse 

Because we will win 

At all cost 

Triumph is in the air 

Our enemies will feel the sting of loss 

So follow me 

And I promise success 

Until that day comes 

We will be restless 

Author's Note

Just a small poem that I wrote. I the Nebraska football prayer as inspiration. Tell me how you like it.
I also put it on video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_vonTsMEa5k

Reviews

[LightforChrist]

I love it! The message in it is so inspirational and true! Great job and keep writing! :)

[L.M.Warde]

This is wonderful. succinct and spot on. I love the rallying feel in it, splendid piece!

[QuirkyPanda]

This is really great :) I love easy way the words flow and how short, sweet, & to the point it is. My only critique would be using punctuation, but of course it might not be in your style to use punctuation, so that's fine :P Just a small suggestion

[Chi Nichole]

I liked this one a lot mike it was very nice its a good way to get people wanting to attack life rather than run from it. I enjoy your writing

[zaneybear]

this is a great piece that makes people want to get up and go, and win. good job

[Perkele.7885]

You had me ready to go, power scooter and all.

[Ravyne Hawke]

Wonderful rally cry.. a great way to stir up loyalty and respect.

[Ronald J Chapman]

Mike great words.

You may like to watch this clip from the movie Facing The Giant's

Never quit Never surrender Never give up
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bVQYnSFq1fU

[MsJewel]

Mike, Very powerful and well written. I didn't get the sports reference until you mentioned it, but I think this could relate to so many other things as well. Well done! :) Julie

[NA]

powerful piece...sure to get any ready for a battle to victory...enjoyed :) x