Panic Switch

Panic Switch

A Poem by Emunah June.

Someone...

Anyone...

 

Tell me where I am...!!

 

I dont know this place...

 

S-Someone please!!!

 

Tell me where I AM!!!!

© 2011 Emunah June.


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OK, I don't have a lot of time, but, luckily, this is a quick poem =)

It's definetly interesting. I like the voice. I think of a small child, desperate, calling out for help... It seems like a venting poem, and I think the feelings were portrayed well. The growing hysteria was nice. Perhaps adding some descripions of what the author sees and whats going on. (Unless it was just a feeling poem, then it should be kept the way it is)

Like all of your poems, it was amazing. Even with a small amount of words, the poem amount to something great. I love reading your work, and I'll review more soon. Wonderful write, 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


I was drawn to this only because of the title. The other studio I'm in on YouTube is PanicSwitchStudios. xD

BUT!

Good poem. :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome poem! I love it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 28, 2011
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