Like The Ending of A Movie

I still love you I'm just a little bit tired

I'm afraid I might hurt myself 

I'm not a nice guy, I'm just being selfish

Saying I still love you is a lie 

You wanted an answer from the beginning 
Like the ending of a movie you've already watched

You were getting more and more difficult for me

Like the perfect story you wanted

You won't be able to bear the cruel goodbye 

My lips wouldn't say the words even if I try

I still love you I'm just a little bit tired

I'm afraid I might hurt myself 

I'm not a nice guy, I'm just being selfish

Saying I love you is a lie 

I've thought about this time and time again

How will I be without you?
Unkept promises of us

Nothing but meaningless words

You won't be able to bear the cruel goodbye 

My lips wouldn't say the words even if I try

I still love you I'm just a little bit tired

I'm afraid I might hurt myself 

I'm not a nice guy, I'm just being selfish

Saying I still love you is a lie 

Why can I not say the words

I still love you but now I am tired of you

You know this is the end 

Lying I love you

Reviews

[sette]

there is honesty in this poem totally appreciates that

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

True love will break our hearts forever. I liked the honest tone in the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[barleygirl]

The part I like about your poem – one of the most honest expressions of how one grows tired of the hassle & drama of a love situation. The part I don’t enjoy so much – lots of repetition thru-out, so the actual message you convey is really only half this much. The repetition waters down the vivid truthfulness of your words for me. These days, people often drop another person without explanation, just disappearing . . . the situation in your poem reminds me of what might be going thru a person’s head when he/she “ghosts” the other person. Sometimes it’s just too tiring to try to explain. I love the straightforward truth of that (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much! It's about the relationship between my mother and me.

[barleygirl]

I never thought of your poem in that way, but now that I think about it, this is like my own relationship with my mom, too! *sigh!*

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

I guess we're similar c:

[¿]

Oh...my goodness....
Reading this poem makes me feel the one who bids farewell pricks his/her heart the most than the one who's being wished good bye....
Indeed it was sad and heart touching!

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you very much! I am glad you liked how the person bids farewell is the one getting hurt more c:

[Nisha M.]

This is a heartbreaking piece. I really enjoyed reading this though. And I must say, your command of the English Language is really excellent. Keep it up!

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you! I often have my friend who is good at English review it! I also had a good teacher in high school!