I Write

I Write

A Poem by Korin
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Ars Poetica

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I Write,
To the warming rage of shared midnight bonfires
Burned through pages i should of never let go.
To the clouded dimness of my vulnerable conscious,
The steam stilled fog of boiling water over my gas stove.
This urge begins from the moment i arise until the moment i close my eyes.
I Write.

    

© 2015 Korin


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Korin
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"from the moment i arise until the moment i close my eyes.
I Write."

When we, humanity stop writing we are headed to a dark abyss from the light of the self and knowledge of our reality. An excellent write. Hopefully you will keep on writing...:)................


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korin

5 Years Ago

I will indeed do so with the encouragement of people thus far. Thanks for the comment. :)
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).......................



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The picture this paints is rich. I adore how you use image to relay hearty themes and make it palpable for readers.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Beautiful, passionate piece of writing :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Korin

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot your comment is appreciated :)
Clever use of imagery here Korin. And I can also feel the passion you have for writing through the references to heat and steam and burning. I realise that you feel like you were born to write from this powerful piece!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korin

5 Years Ago

Thanks a ton :)
Those last two lines really managed to get me sold. That is exactly how most writers feel ,I think. Even if we don't actually write anything, we spend most of the time subconsciously trying to think to of something to write. Overall, this is a very cleverly written, beautiful poem with a very nice "camping out" theme added to it. Fantastic job! Keep the magic flowing! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korin

5 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to comment i appreciate it. :)
"from the moment i arise until the moment i close my eyes.
I Write."

When we, humanity stop writing we are headed to a dark abyss from the light of the self and knowledge of our reality. An excellent write. Hopefully you will keep on writing...:)................


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korin

5 Years Ago

I will indeed do so with the encouragement of people thus far. Thanks for the comment. :)
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:).......................
Fantastic! Very passionate. :) great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korin

5 Years Ago

Wow, thanks a tone. I just made an account with this website today and already I've gotten encourage.. read more
Korin

5 Years Ago

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A. Fiorillo

5 Years Ago

:) I'm new here too, and feel very the same way.
This is beautiful. Very passionate and a lot is said. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korin

5 Years Ago

Thanks for this i was insecure about it.
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Rm
Short and simple write! Great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korin

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Rm

5 Years Ago

Your welcome:)
Beautiful flow of thoughts and I like the description of the writing. You said a lot in the short poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korin

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this. I appreciate and learn from every review i can get.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. I enjoyed your poetry.

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