Random thought

Random thought

A Poem by Korin
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Motivation

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Remembrance of you is but a mere sight,
collected evidence of how you chose to spend your nights.
If fear of the dark invented light,
then it is fear of the world that can bring life.












 

© 2015 Korin


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Korin
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This is what poetry is suppose to be. Snaps. I really loved the profound way you write, but you're true talent in this one is the how just two sentences can pack such a punch. Awesome

Posted 4 Years Ago


simplicity at its finest!
love the way you write! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Korin

4 Years Ago

Thanks this mean a lot to me :)
Amy R

4 Years Ago

my pleasure :)
I liked the way you used the words. You say a lot using the language with skill. You create wish and ending in this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Korin

5 Years Ago

thanks a ton. :) i appreciate this review. :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Necessity is the mother of invention - Fear is probably the auntie that is always in Necessities ear with her doom-laden scenarios so should also be given some credit. You spoke well of Auntie Fear here Korin. Well penned.
:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


interesting concepts well presented

Posted 5 Years Ago


Korin

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. i was worried about this i feel like it was rushed when i could have added more to it.
This is very good! I love the concept

Posted 5 Years Ago


Korin

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. i'm glad you've enjoyed it :)
~You've stated this incredibly well. ~

Posted 5 Years Ago


Korin

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot :)
First, darkness is just an absence of light. Fear is an absence of true peace and security. Now there is a reverential fear which respects a Higher power but it is more of a valued respect and appreciation of the Love and blessings of the Divine or the benevolent authority. True love is all embracing while fear is exclusive. I like your motivational thought for it inspired me to share my views...:)..

Posted 5 Years Ago


Korin

5 Years Ago

Thanks. i was looking to inspire some people even if just a few. :)
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome. ....:)....

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Korin
Korin

Buffalo , NY



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